{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"18163907","dateCreated":"1260826794","smartDate":"Dec 14, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"cpenna","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cpenna","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/18163907"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Comments on your final revision","description":"Overall, there are places where you make interesting points, but there's an unfinished quality to this as well (esp. since there's no conclusion). See more specific comments below.
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\nYour thesis could be a little clearer. How distinctively different are her works of fiction from the reality? Be specific.
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\nUse a trans. to set up your next subheading.
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\nIn the Trial section you say this:
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\nGlaspell wrote several article discussing new evidence and gaining the attention of the people, leading them on each article so as to build up the anticipation.
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\nBut you don't give examples of her doing things like discussing evidence.
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\nYou do a better job of this in the next section. But you need a citation for this assertion: "Glaspell was unhappy with the male-dominated court trying Hossack and wished to try to use her influence to sway the outcome of the case."
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\nThe subheading on Trifles and A Jury of Her Peers doesn't have any concrete examples from these works, though you make up for that in the next section. Maybe the 2 should be combined. But in the first 2 passages you offer in the next section, you don't coment on and explain the supposed similiarities you see there. You should. You provide a nunmber of excerpts from her journalism but don't have corresponding passges from her fiction.
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\nYou don't have a conclusion, which obviously hurts your paper's organization.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17829757","dateCreated":"1260165581","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"gmozeik","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/gmozeik","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17829757"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Glaspell's Articles","description":"Patricia Bryan's site has the link to Glaspell's articles.
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\nhttp:\/\/www.midnightassassin.com\/SGarticles.html<\/a>","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17741267","dateCreated":"1259910002","smartDate":"Dec 3, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"cpenna","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cpenna","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17741267"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Some Comments on Your Rough Draft","description":"Here are some things that I noticed while reading your rough draft. They're in no particular order of importance.
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\n1. Your links in your Works Cited don't work. You also need 6 sources. Also, you should list Glaspell in your W.C.
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\n2. In your account of the murder and of the trial, you refer several times to Glaspell's newspaper accounts. But you don't cite them or quote from them or give your reader a sense of them. You should. You do do a little of this in the section on Glaspell's coverage, but this could be developed further. For example, look at this:
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\n"After the case was decided in April 1901, Margaret Hossack being found guilty, Glaspell wrote her last article on the case and shortly thereafter moved away from Iowa. In this article, the case having been decided, Glaspell added no commentary,"
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\nIt would be nice if you could quote from that article and show<\/strong> your reader what you mean.
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\nI don't think you need summaries of the play and the story, but a kind of side-by-side comparison of the play (or story) and the newspaper articles would be very useful. I see you're planning on doing that, which is good, but you should have done it already.
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\n- \"cpenna\"<\/a> cpenna<\/a><\/span>","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17615181","dateCreated":"1259725954","smartDate":"Dec 1, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mbecker75","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mbecker75","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17615181"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Notes","description":"I moved the notes section to a separate discussion since the main page has out draft on it.
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\nResearch Susan Glaspell\u2019s newspaper accounts of the Hossack murder trial and analyze the way she took one kind of written reality and transmuted it into another in her short story \u201cA Jury of Her Peers\u201d and her play Trifles.
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\n * Probably need to find and read "A Jury of Her Peers"
\n * Read up on the real story of the Hossack murder trial
\n * Make list of the things similarities\/differences between the real trial and the fictitious renditions
\n * Develop a thesis based on these comparisons about what the main idea\/point of transmuting the story was
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\n"A Jury of Her Peers" online text: http:\/\/www.learner.org\/interactives\/literature\/story\/fulltext.html<\/a>","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17277033","dateCreated":"1258954915","smartDate":"Nov 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"gmozeik","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/gmozeik","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17277033"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Progress Report","description":"As of now, we have only completed very general searches, finding what look like a few useful articles and books. We intend to collect these sources and distribute them among the group before the Thanksgiving break. Over break, we each plan to analyze these sources, and then meet as a group when we return from break to discuss their relevance and begin to organize our ideas and thesis, gathering more resources if necessary.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17354019","body":"I forget how we split up the sources, but I went to the library and got my book and printed out my article:
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\nSusan Glaspell\u2019s century of American women : a critical interpretation of her work (Veronica Makowsky) PS3513 .L35 Z75 1993
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\nand
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\nFound on Academic OneFile Database: "Murder, she wrote": the genesis of Susan Glaspell's Trifles." by Linda Ben-Zvi (Theatre Journal)
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\nWe should probably post throughout the break what we find in the sources","dateCreated":"1259094833","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mbecker75","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mbecker75","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"16854359","dateCreated":"1258131914","smartDate":"Nov 13, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mbecker75","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mbecker75","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl-110-research-projects.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/16854359"},"dateDigested":1532428714,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Research Done on Databases and DELCAT","description":"Found on DELCAT: "Midnight assassin : a murder in America\u2019s heartland" by Patricia Bryan and Thomas Wolf about the Hossack murders (HV6533.I8 B79 2005)
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\nFound on Academic OneFile Database: "Stories in fiction and in fact: Susan Glaspell's 'A Jury of Her Peers' and the 1901 murder trial of Margaret Hossack" by Patricia Bryan
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\nFound on Academic OneFile Database: "Murder, she wrote": the genesis of Susan Glaspell's Trifles." by Linda Ben-Zvi (Theatre Journal)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17277099","body":"Search on DELCAT for "Glaspell":
\nSusan Glaspell :\u00a0a critical biography\u00a0(Barbara Ozieblo)
\nPS 3513 .L35 Z78 2000
\nSusan Glaspell : essays on her theater and fiction (edited by Linda Ben-Zvi) PS3513 .L35 Z86 1995
\nSusan Glaspell\u2019s century of American women : a critical interpretation of her work (Veronica Makowsky) PS3513 .L35 Z75 1993
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\nSearch on DELCAT for "Trifles":
\nSusan Glaspell and the anxiety of expression : language and isolation in the plays (Kristina Hinz-Bode) PS3513.L35 Z69 2006","dateCreated":"1258955169","smartDate":"Nov 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"gmozeik","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/gmozeik","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}